Drew Banks (2005)
"Somehow, over the course of two hours, his disillusion with
corporate politics led to his disillusion
with Scott. And in this singular acknowledgement, Grey began to
disassemble the divisions of the social compartmentalization he had spent
years constructing."
And so Drew Banks acknowledges the shifting tide within the character
of his first novel, Able Was I. Grey Tigrett began his journey more than a
decade before on a post-graduation trek across Europe with his two closest
college friends (actually his girlfriend and a man with whom he was
infatuated), as well as an annoying stray acquaintance who threatened the
camaraderie of the small group. As a diversion (or perhaps a slightly
puerile prick) to the growing tension among the friends, Grey proposes a
side trip to the island of Elba, just off the Western coast of Italy.
Although the group is on a budget, they find themselves spirited by ferry
from the coast to the tiny plot of land, which also had the unlikely honor
of hosting Napoleon during his period of exile. The undulating ride there
mimics the rolling, water-infused central theme of the novel as Grey and
the reader drift from past to present and back again.
Able Was I is a palindrome for the key moment of the novel, when Grey
first saw Elba. Grey uses this moment to define the most important
decisions he makes over the next fourteen years. For instance, Grey is
able to see the beauty emerging over the horizon line in the craggy form
of Elba that interrupts the shimmering sea. Likewise, he looks past the
trash-covered steps of his prospective home and recognizes a familiar New
York street, one he visited while he prepared to leave for Elba years
before, a street which becomes a home to Grey and his partner Scott as
they lovingly renovate the open loft with a fantastic view of the Hudson
River. The moment, however, also forces him to confront the growing
feelings of distaste Grey has for the superficial, social-climbing life
Scott is attempting to construct and maintain for the couple. A company
cruise without Scott to Europe, complete with a visit to Elba, provides
the perfect opportunity for reminiscing about his experiences there as a
younger man.
"The olive grove was still there, its stone wall jagged from
stones dislodged over what looked like years of neglect. The trees were
much the same as he remembered but as it was November, their branches hung
dormant, the ground free of netting. Grey turned to see the faucet, small
against the brick of the house. Like the branches, it too was denuded,
hoseless. Its rusted handle turned easily. Into Grey’s cupped hands the
brown water bled clear."
The complexity of Banks’ language as he describes scenes like these
is what drew me to the book initially. Banks has a business background;
his previous books, according to his brief biographical note, examine
personal relationships and behaviors as they affect business. His novel
has much of the same focus on personal relationships and their larger
effects. The "deconstruction" he mentions about his writing
holds true for both genres as well. He takes apart the physical and
emotional aspect of a scene to give the reader a collage of images and
words that seem to be reflected in splinters of a shattered mirror. The
reading of the novel is slow; it’s not so much assimilation of a story
as it is a process of picking up the pieces Banks presents and
reconstructing the whole. I teach English to juniors in high school; this
is how I ask them to read Fitzgerald’s Gatsby. Banks’ technical love
affair with words is obvious and somewhat mesmerizing.
Banks apparently understands that the frequent flashbacks in time can
be confusing for the reader, so he uses Grey’s journaling habit, begun
during his initial Elba trip, to create a thread among the scenes. The
writing is also a way for Grey to gauge his growth and forget his
second-guessing of his life. Elba has become the marker for so many
experiences, and Grey spends his final trip to the island considering the
hold the island and its inhabitants have had over him, even as his
geographic proximity lessened.
Overall, Able Was I is an excellent example of a story that is both
fluid and structured. A compelling read, the novel is able to embody a
philosophy of personal growth as well as maintain an interesting
linguistic format. The book is available through booklocker.com, a small
press company, or at several stores in the area.
Rebecca James lives and teaches in Allentown, Pennsylvania. She spends
her free time reading in Rehoboth Beach, Delaware.